Thanks MD!
A friend blogs over on that *other* site, posting a goofy haiku take-off every day. The structure isn't rigid, it's more about word choice and feeling and sometimes it's great fun, with people adding on and getting quite ridiculous or quite revealing, or both. Here are a couple from me:
classes done until fall
now I'm late with my taxes
and collecting rent
it's not the dying
that scares me, it's the living
unseen, unspoken
red dress, windy day
delights construction workers
"hey! hold down your skirt!"
"Intimidating"
so grow a pair already
or ask to share mine
3 Comments:
you haiku with such integrity
I have cheated at times, but trying to get it down and get it right in 5-7-5 is a fun challenge!
Ha! You're welcome! Enjoying reading all your work, as always.
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